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雅思大作文写作中如何拓展观点?

发布时间: 2016年7月21日     点击数:771 来源:启德考培广州分校 快速预约
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雅思写作一直都是同学们的心头恨,现在我们来分享一下考试写作的注意事项来帮助同学们如何在40分钟内快准狠的俘获考官的心。
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雅思写作一直都是同学们的心头恨,现在我们来分享一下考试写作的注意事项来帮助同学们如何在40分钟内快准狠的俘获考官的心。

 

首先我们用一个例子来说明。

Many people think that the Internet will replace books and newspapers because it is cheaper and quicker. As well as that, it is easier to use.

这是一位同学们写的关于网络是否或取代书籍和报纸的一段话。问题来了,在这里这位同学把cheaper和quicker这两个观点放在一起写,但是并没有解释说明。其次,it is easier to use这个观点很好,也没有论证。这个是一个典型失分的问题,现在我们来看看如何构用三个步骤思一个主题段。

 

第一步,构思观点brainstorm some ideas

首先我们需要一些观点,在头脑风暴的时候,我们需要对比网络和报纸以及书籍。经过对比后我们发现。网络比其报纸和书籍更便宜,更新更快,更容易使用。

 

第二步,扩展观点Develop sentence

在扩展观点的时候同学们可以解释说明原因或者举例的方式去扩展观点。Just keep asking yourself why.

The Internet is cheaper than newspapers, because you can read many newspapers for free on their websites.

 

The Internet is quicker to bring news and information out. It can take years for a book to be published and reach the bookstore. The information is often out of date.

 

For me, the Internet is easier to use, because you can find information more quickly and easily than in a big library or in a big set of encyclopedias. You just use a search engine and the results come instantly.

 

第三步,总结观点,添加一个主题句Add a topic sentence

Many people think that the Internet will replace books and newspapers because it is cheaper, quicker and easier to use. The Internet is cheaper than newspapers, because you can read many newspapers for free on their websites. The Internet is quicker to bring news and information out. It can take years for a book to be published and reach the bookstore. The information is often out of date. For me, the Internet is easier to use, because you can find information more quickly and easily than in a big library or in a big set of encyclopedias. You just use a search engine and the results come instantly.

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